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Saturday, April 27, 2013

Free Verse Poem: The Providing Tree



Title: The Providing Tree

The tree anchors the soil to the earth,
It is a home to many and shelter to some.
Creatures find their sustenance in its reach,
Leaves, branches, roots and bark makes their den.
Each finds their use for the branches held high.
Taking refuge in the umbrella of the tree’s time.
It is the blanket that keeps the earth warm,
The fan that keeps it cool.
It maintains sturdy course, bracing high and low.

Dr. Murad Abel

Free verse poetry does not have the rhythm or meter like other poetry. However, one can argue that free verse is not completely free. It does have some level of comma use, word choice, and themes that give it a structure. The free versus is meant to tell more of a story than it is to delight in rhythm and rhyme. Other examples of free versus may be found in Walt Whitman’s work where commas and words create natural pause.

The writer seeks to connect images in the readers mind. They do this through the specific choices of words. For example, “like a willow reaches for mother earth” could put an image of a weeping willow with the branches focused downward or it could be used to enhance a concept of a crying infant such as “The child became like a willow that reaches for mother earth”. 

For example, the poem above is considered free versus but it also has a number of images it portrays to the reader. Consider the following:

Line 1-Anchored, connected, foundation.
Line 2-Shelter,  home, refuge
Line 3-Sustenance, food, life
Line 4- Den, home, borough
Line 5-Usage, utility, providing
Line 6-Time, longevity, unending
Line 7-Blanket, warmth, protective
Line 8-Cool, refuge, oasis
Line 9-Sturdy, unbreakable, strong

If we look at only these words and the images associated with them we may find a tree to have a strong foundation, be shelter, give us living, a place to exist, having practical use, providing nourishment, always giving, giving warmth, giving coolness, and never ending.  It is possible to look at the poem as representing life and homes. That homes are strong, teaching us skills, always providing something we need, giving us protection, and never ending in its quest to provide this. The tree is the stable unending home to the creatures that live on the earth. The poem helps us respect nature and interconnected activities of all things that exist in that environment.

You might be interested in reading the following article on how plants try and reverse overheating through releasing cooling gases. Here

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